Friday, August 27, 2010

Heaven and Health

I'm making this logo for a friend who is opening a massage therapy business. She really likes it but thought the lines should be thicker (see second image). She sent it to some "friends" who said it is hard to read. I told her I would try to make it more legible but I can't tell what about it is hard to read. Everyone I have shown it to around here can read it. Any opinions?

1 comment:

  1. Looks nice. I think gridding it up a bit would help legibility. I'm thinking a more consistent baseline on the "eaven" (but leaving the dropped tail on the end of the 'n') and on the "ealt". Then maybe adjust the H's to reinforce that grid. It's a fine balance between legibility and the whimsy of the hand drawn letters.