tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8355814998901233401.post2823220480963040138..comments2011-11-09T10:00:31.003-08:00Comments on design grüp: Sarah's wedding announcementAshley Mackayhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12111748817174029795noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8355814998901233401.post-21370632113586826542010-08-06T10:35:24.565-07:002010-08-06T10:35:24.565-07:00Good concept. Image 2 works the best. Like the whi...Good concept. Image 2 works the best. Like the white border, but when you break the border it seems to cause some weird shapes. Does that make sense? White flourishes are a good touch but would look at making the top ones in image 2 balanced/evenly spaced.heymendozahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589451921229136963noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8355814998901233401.post-62915820061803950912010-08-05T10:57:21.015-07:002010-08-05T10:57:21.015-07:00The second is definitely my fav. That image is gre...The second is definitely my fav. That image is great. And I agree with Cole about interstate. It feels a little heavy to me in the first invite? But I don't know if everything has to be straight up 1950's. I think you can fake it with something else and have it still look 50's, if that makes sense.jennyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17344444861072224946noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8355814998901233401.post-84617940813416436442010-08-05T10:40:55.113-07:002010-08-05T10:40:55.113-07:00ash, some thoughts:
1. i think the concept is real...ash, some thoughts:<br />1. i think the concept is really nice. the second piece seems to nail it the most, in my eyes. I really like that one, especially. <br />2. the interstate font (that's what you're using, right?) feels awkwardly out of it's era in there. what about something like futura? <br />3. i really like the white ornamentation that you bring in. again, i think it works best in the second piece overall. I like the way it sits in the flowers in the first, but the 1/2 border on the top and left side feels a little weird to me. I'm not sure if it's just me being square or what. I don't know… i don't think I would want it going over to the flowers as I really like the way they're extending off the blue.colehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17332911646004035211noreply@blogger.com